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The Fallen

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We fell in love with each other,
and then we fell apart.
We fell for other people,
then back into each other's arms.
We fell over ourselves in trying
to break each other's hearts,
and fell into debt attempting
to try and look the part.

But of all the many mistakes we made,
the greatest of all was merely this:
to fall for society's movie myths,
and think that the fallen could ever enjoy
the beauty and innocence
of girl, meets boy.  
This poem has taken me a very long time to write because it took me a very long time to face up to.

Antoine de Saint Exupery once said that love is not gazing at each other, but looking outwards in the same direction, and I may have lost myself in your eyes, but honestly and truly, we were always pulling in opposite directions.

And that. That is life, I suppose.

Please feel free to give any critique about the actual writing or the form or whatever, but please, leave my heart alone. It's had enough.
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wildsong-dragonchild's avatar
wow. This is amazing. It really captured what I feel right now too.
I hope your heart feels better soon.