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Moscow sings Bon Jovi by ~Anarkhos:iconAnarkhos:





Do not tell me Vegas isn't like it is in movies.
Do not tell me Paris isn't like it is in films.
Do not tell me New York isn't beautiful in fall,
Do not tell me London's not my real home at all.

Do not love me, and then leave me.
Do not use me, and then grieve me.
Do not break me, and abuse me.
Do not hurt me, and do not tease me.

Do not tell me Moscow doesn't sing Bon Jovi
Do not tell me Scotland isn't wild.
Do not tell me Berlin wasn't broken by a wall,
Do not tell me I'll never find my home at all.

Tell me not that the skies are made of diamonds,
Prove to me the grass is greener on this side.
Promise me it doesn't always end in rain,
When you dream of catching rainbows.  

I saw an old woman lonely in the market,
and she told me she walked on clouds
- and it was worth the heartbreak

Help me, it's the last night on earth again,
Moscow sings to me with eyes of diamond glass.
I have found my land of clouds
and I will not let it go.

I leave you at the excess baggage point
and leave the diamonds for the hookers to divide.
I'm chasing moonbeams far across the oceans,
I'm chasing sunlight far and wide.
©2007-2009 ~Anarkhos
:iconanarkhos:

Author's Comments

This title is just for ~riam because she really loves Bon Jovi & they're her favourite band.

Edit: Dec 28th. This poem has been quite popular but I actually don't like it much because it isn't very good. I've tried to improve it here, but does anyone have any suggestions for further improvements?

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:iconqueenhrosie:
J. loves Bon Jovi too.

And I love
this poem.

* :heart: *

--
I hear
your voice
down the hall, through the window, above
all those trees, a light
it seems
& you are singing. What song
is that The words
are beautiful.

-LeRoi Jones
:iconanarkhos:
Why thank you. I love Bon Jovi, but ~riam does not. Well, she won't admit it, at least.

--
And I will show you something different from either
Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
:iconriam:
JNADLJFNA;SKJDNF'AKSJDNF'AOSDNF'AOWERINF\AWE

for anybody reading this.
I DO NOT LOVE BON JOVI. D:
helena
you
are
cruel
so i'm not going to give you any critique on this BWAHAHA.

alksdnmf;aslkdmnf'aslkdfml'asdfkm
ookay maybe i'm overreacting
but

ew! bon jovi.
:iconanarkhos:
Fine. Be that way.

But you liked 'these arms are open all night' when you didn't know it was by Bon Jovi.

So ha.

--
And I will show you something different from either
Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
:iconb1gfan:
Moscow sings Bon Jovi (and Pantera) and Paris is JUST like the movies, unless you're trying to buy stationary from a little shpop in the east end of the city, because then it's just like LA.
:iconanarkhos:
Awesome :] I've never been to Paris, or Moscow, so I'm relying on information from my brother on those.

I've never been to LA either, when it comes to that.

--
And I will show you something different from either
Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
:iconb1gfan:
Someday. In the meantime I'll be reading your works 'k.
:iconanarkhos:
Yay :]

--
And I will show you something different from either
Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
:iconjohohanna:
I hope that old lady is right.

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